【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
. k7 i0 r, q5 Y( L5 z0 B$ F6 _6 k! Z6 NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; Z# [( X0 Q9 X* G$ V" e- RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! ?3 e2 n0 {; [3 v% vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 C( V* u, i+ @' }7 P  {: ?9 v1 O( RThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( H& \6 g- u/ Q( r1 a1 CSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! g7 _1 V' ]! A& v2 o$ F/ }1 JYou needn’t fear anything
8 Z6 \4 K: n( n/ A; m# bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" Q0 u. \9 u6 z4 v4 qI really want to know just how much you love me
: h3 ]9 y  u% \0 `# z9 B: T- xI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: \+ w: {6 O; `( ^0 h" \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% A- }4 U6 i5 g0 n# o& n0 yI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 J7 n$ p: Q( y2 VI’m still filled with fear
. ]- u. v7 [/ y: D8 jYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# C. n$ f0 y6 [0 c, b" SWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 m7 m+ ], j! w- A6 M* D( @If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, |( T. l% c2 i6 V2 PRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  j+ l4 E4 T) R/ a) t6 F9 b<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ s. ^1 u' z2 P& T- R<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! T6 j0 n5 A" x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 x1 k1 Z/ a* k: v* o5 R1 T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" [4 m" y0 Y9 P; u5 Y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ V8 w- T, s' e. B* M) ~- `+ z; t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! u, A# v6 }; R: M8 Q2 `9 U$ X$ V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) }. ~6 G0 W. E/ v4 c7 g( m7 X2 l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 ]+ `* E- [0 B/ D9 L; A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 {+ p8 r$ M* U) g<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 z" i  o5 a( @9 v7 h9 J+ Z3 t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 p8 w  e2 p9 @) Z$ ~<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- G2 t. z/ E9 e- I* A& ?<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  u* |- [5 X1 c" ]; z+ P  n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' E/ F, O5 L) F/ S" g! J7 D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  k: x+ U3 [/ C$ a0 c+ q. G<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. q* l) t. J$ @. C$ O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' W" s  D! Q% F- H9 u# N8 s) i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& _4 Q( I/ }4 `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ e9 _/ {+ K. \* S<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" B& f2 @$ J3 D<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% x+ ?: p8 h1 e+ l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ j1 {  J  I! }( z, B! h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. j5 ]* ~6 q" W. D& ^8 ~: E: a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( w) M3 N  _/ {" r: R! F<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 l4 o% U; m& Y  i( J0 V) m<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) g  y2 T9 X2 p- _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! g9 \! p7 a. f( `0 J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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) y' j9 p6 ~8 q4 S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% J4 D1 H8 M5 y7 g0 o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>