【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; l1 @, {1 L1 }1 n2 x; E$ n歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 k3 l! m5 X& M$ x* p1 S; f$ g: p7 ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: ]5 X( S7 D# u7 j" N. d3 kThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 ?. Z9 i. U) W  E2 jSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! i" H- j% }7 o: f- h# NEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 i2 v" j! e$ Y5 v- z3 ]6 yNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 X9 t1 A+ O, |6 ?' HI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  A! I: p. S: Y7 ]. f& T- aI regret not dying
3 H9 T9 M+ ^# h8 zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( T: H# |& W7 p$ n/ F9 T& v/ e$ bRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" R2 c; i& Q0 F9 f; |' n* @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 R/ |- k% _4 [' D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) m2 G3 ?( b1 G- O! i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 i9 P& ?/ d4 o. O: \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 S" |# u( V$ A' |$ q$ s! o2 h6 o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) F% A2 p) K; G4 S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 E: |/ S+ v$ ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 X) V$ e$ C, H( G1 Z! t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 H+ G! {$ @6 P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ B7 x0 u: }* d6 V' U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' u9 t3 `+ |$ r: g<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. A8 K5 m1 V0 b$ {- N/ ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) Z0 S2 e+ O7 B% o# `/ i<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 E6 x; J! m3 B, V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ z  s; x" e8 B1 k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, S+ m, i6 M# q, D" B$ B7 Z) i9 }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* d! n: F2 S  M, f1 S<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ P6 d0 z. P; P, w3 t( u7 f# s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# ], R5 L. f: @# C4 _8 N/ E! i<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. c) |: A4 H( r. l: A) v* Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 _6 D" i5 }: K0 ^. @! Z' @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: D9 Q, [: E* q- s0 c( J4 W- ^+ v2 i<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" N9 [$ F& [: t7 G/ J3 J" g* _2 b; [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 `) Q6 ]0 Q1 q, o8 x$ M4 i<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 O* ^" S  k5 S" G5 v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* j6 W1 Z* g# ], c2 j8 R1 Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# V9 ]2 V+ J1 D9 e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) P. w2 B* L/ e# m; p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

5 J' @' `4 l) i. K, I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>